I blame Discord.
I submited it cause I was wrong, Thanks Seth :::::DDDDDDDDDD
I was going to try and do the "2 Day Drawing Training Grounds - Service Edition" On EQ But with a 40 hour job and 9 hours a day or more sometimes (Tell me how that dosnt add to 40 and I will simply say Walmart) So really I should just stop trying all together with those things. Because I missed the dead line...BIG TIME D: [link]
The good thing is I put together something despite my chance I even trying to enter. Idk it's sorta dull to me but I think it's sorta funny.
If you can think of what Pinkie Pie should say pun wise I'll totaly give you credit if this one is lame
Well that's it!~ lates.
For originality, I thought it was quite unique. I'm yet to see another comic or image that shows this kind of scenario, nor anything that resembles it too much. No real gripes here.
For your technique, the art style is wonderful. Really vibrant, very stylised and unique, exciting and fun to look at. Though I had to take a star off for one fairly big reason: your speech bubble placement. Reading through the comic was fairly confusing, as the speech bubbles were placed all over the comic. It should read from right to left, top to bottom. In this case, Trixie's text should be placed above Rainbow Dash's and to the left, with Rainbow's the the lower right of hers. Pinkie's speech should be above Applejack's, as should Spike's, as it makes no sense reading it otherwise. It took my quite a bit to figure out what was being said. For that, you get a 4/5 for Technique.
Overall, the comic is very well done, despite a few minor flaws, and the humorous story paired with the vibrant art style gives the comic a big impact on readers. Overall, very well done.
Chocolate milk is now my excuse for everything
HOW THE HAY WERE YOU ABLE TO GET PINKIE'S FACE LIKE THAT?!?!?!
You might say this came
This Whole situation is:
Throw all the puns, see what sticks!!!
Hey now, there doesn't have to be a sexual undertone to this...I give my friends backrubs all the time, it doesn't mean we're doing it when our other friends aren't looking!...naive DiscordantPrincess is naive.
"when we...chocolate milk..."
its not "when we *make* chocolate milk" or anything P:
and (kinda off topic) also rarely do we ever see the reward mario gets after saving the princess other then "cake". P: